On
Monday I downloaded my professor’s essay: “Form and Loss in Charlotte Smith’s
Elegiac Sonnets”. It wasn’t required but for future essays it might be a good
idea to see how she likes to write them.
It had been so warm the previous day
that I was worried that I’d overdressed for my bike ride to class, but the
temperature had dropped and so my extra layers were comfortable.
The classroom was a mess when I
arrived. I had to spread the desks out, raise the shades, throw away some
garbage, raise the projector screen, find a table for Professor Weisman’s desk
that didn’t look like someone had spilled their sticky lunch on it, put two
lecterns together and dig some chalk out of my backpack to replace what had
been stolen again.
The professor told us that she was
going for a root canal that afternoon.
She was dismayed by the lack of
attendance to her class because she goes to a lot of trouble to prepare her
lectures and there were only 18 in attendance out of 40. She wanted our opinion
as to whether she should take attendance and deduct marks for absence. I told
her that since there are no participation marks then it wouldn’t make sense to
deduct marks for non-participation. She said that in the fourth year seminars
that she teaches there are participation marks and she takes attendance but
that’s because the classes are smaller. She opined that taking attendance for a
class of 40 is too much.
We looked at Charlotte Smith’s long
poem, “Beachy Head”. It was published posthumously in 1807 and some critics
speculate that it is unfinished. Professor Weisman thinks that it is complete.
Smith tries to establish a strong
cultural voice for herself by writing both sonnets, Latinate and learned
scientific footnotes, on botany, ornithology and geography, which had been elements
of the high cultural preserve of men. She was a voracious reader and she was
learned, erudite and scholarly, but not taken seriously. Her prefaces were
apologetic.
Beachy Head is a prospect poem like
Tintern Abbey. A prospect poem starts off with the poet overlooking a natural
landscape. In a Romantic prospect poem the natural scenes are invested with
meaning because of the imaginative vitality of the poet. The activity of the
mind is given primary attention.
She’s at the top of Beachy Head,
which is one of the first land points in England from France, though not as
close as Dover.
There are no geological similarities
between southern England and northern France other than the chalky cliffs of
Beachy Head.
She is addressing the cliff she’s on
and looking across to France.
England was at war from 1793 to 1815. War is an unnatural
disunity.
Smith believed that a massive concussion, or earthquake had
separated England from France but it was really a massive flood from a glacial
lake.
The word “sublime” is contrasted with “beautiful”. That
which is sublime is often terrifying and has ennobling grandeur and majesty
like cascading waterfalls and cliffs.
The poem is in iambic pentameter, the most soothing and the
closest to human speech.
Smith defines herself against the example of Wordsworth. She
seems to be speaking of herself.
She is on top. “I would recline” is in the subjunctive. She
is assuming ease by reclining.
I suggested that in reclining she makes herself as low as
possible and yet she is still on top. She did not climb to get there but she is
at the high point unobtrusively. She’s claimed the summit at the meridian of
the sun. The enormous horizon that she sees can only be viewed from a height,
both physically and culturally. People on the sea are beneath her.
Her aspiring fancy wanders sublime.
Time is sped up.
The poem is localized in time and place. She is specifying
details of visionary fancy with localization.
She personifies contemplation and herself as the genius of
contemplation.
Memory retraces the history of England.
Her footnotes are a supplement to her poetic vision. She
fuses fancy with learned discourse.
She moves from history back to the prospect and to a
peaceful, pastoral place but then inserts human criminality into it. The
shepherds have to be criminals in order to make ends meet.
What is the significance of the interruption of the pastoral
with the criminal?
I wrote that she’s placed a serpent into Wordsworth’s type
of pastoral paradise. The one hut made of sea flints and not pastoral material
is the home of the dealer in contraband. The fact that he braves snowstorms to
perform his criminal tasks suggests desperation and necessity. She seems to be
saying that the pastoral is not a secure setting.
Some have suggested that Wordsworth deliberately suppressed
the evidence of industry in the setting he was describing in order to maintain
the pastoral mood. The smoke from factories may have been visible from his
point of view.
Smith takes her poem beyond the pastoral and departs from
convention. It is contextualized by war.
From line 282 to 389, beginning with “I once was happy” she
speaks about herself and the growth of her mind, much like Wordsworth. She
would have read Tintern Abbey. Her work is more detailed, less sanitized and
more contextualized than Wordsworth’s. We don’t get footnotes in Tintern Abbey.
Beginning with line 506 she talks about the hermit. Solitude
is distinguished from being active and engaged like a poet sharing a prospect.
She has a vision of unsanitized and unaestheticized poetic insight but still an
aesthetic product of high culture. It’s not that it’s not consoling, because
there is a lot to be consoled about.
At this point
Professor Weisman gave us back our term papers. I got another A, though at 85%
I just squeaked in. It was a much more ambitious paper than my previous one
though. In this one I juggled and tied together sixteen poems while in the
other I just talked about one. Her note said it was “Intelligent and
interesting, with very fine textual analysis and critical thinking.
But she also said
that I was capable of writing a stronger intro. I am not!
I didn’t stop at
the supermarket on the way home but I probably should have because I’m running
out of grapes.
That night I
marinated a rack of pork ribs with ginger, garlic, soy sauce and honey and
roasted them in the oven. I had two ribs with a potato, chopped onion and gravy
while watching Peter Gunn.
In this story some
hoods force their way into Mother’s after closing time. The staff is still
there and one of the hoods asks Edie if she’s Edie Hart. She says she is and he
shoots her in the shoulder. He says to “tell Peter Gunn that the three years
are up” and then the hoods leave. After seeing Edie in the hospital, Gunn
visits Lieutenant Jacoby, who’s still there from being shot two episodes ago.
Jacoby tells Gunn that a man named Grayco, who Gunn put away for three years,
just got out last week. Gunn goes to a club that Grayco used to co-own. The
jazz trumpet player Pete Candoli is playing there. He questions the owner and
is asked to leave. He punches the bouncer when he tries to force him out and
then he leaves. Gunn goes to see Wolfgang, a man with a thick German accent who
makes a living teaching English diction. When Gunn arrives Wolfgang is busy
trying to teach his parrot Sam how to pronounce words properly. The parrot
says, “Hi Pete!” when it sees Gunn. Wolfgang tells Gunn that Grayco is waiting
for him at the River Warehouse. When he arrives the voice of Grayco calls from
above and directs him up a ladder into a loft. One of the rungs on the ladder
breaks but Gunn manages to hang on. At the top he finds the voice is from a
tape recorder. Meanwhile a man on the ground knocks the ladder away so Gunn
can’t get down with it. The man below starts shooting and Gunn fires back. Gunn
jumps to avoid a bullet and winds up dropping his gun. He begins throwing heavy
items down at his assailant. Gunn drops a heavy netting of rope on the gunman,
jumps to some other netting hanging from the rafters and then drops to the
ground. He jumps the man and they fight. Gunn is knocked backward. The man is
about to throw a barrel at Gunn when he finds his gun and fires at the man’s
shoulder. He’s about to force him to tell him where Grayco is when a policeman
tells him to drop it. Gunn is arrested, which is odd, since altercations like
this happen in every episode and the cops don’t seem to care. Gunn is told they
will book him if he doesn’t back out of his war with Grayco, so he agrees. But
when Gunn gets home one of Grayco’s men is waiting and he takes him to an
amusement park that’s closed for the night. He meets Grayco on the
merry-go-round. Grayco's man tries to hit Gunn from behind but Gunn throws him
into Grayco, who falls back and lands against the switch that turns the
merry-go-round on. Grayco fires at Gunn but shoots his own man in the back.
They fight among the horsies as they go up and down until finally Gunn knocks
Grayco off the ride and punches him until he's unconscious.
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