Now that I’ve broken my fast I’m planning on trying to break my old
snacking habits and to only eat three times a day, except for some fruit in
between if I feel peckish.
On Saturday I pretty
much finished the prose piece that I am required to write as accompaniment to
my poetry manuscript for my final project of the Canadian Poetry course. Since
this is not an essay and there is no thesis to prove, there doesn’t seem to be
very much over which to agonize in this particular paper. It should be all
right if I make sure there are not a lot of repetitions of words, poor
punctuation and stunted flow. I won’t consider it done until I can read it
through aloud without making a single correction. I orated the thing about
twenty times throughout the day, making adjustments each time until I had
nothing more against it.
I made a big salad for
dinner and wanted to put a few mushrooms on it but the mushrooms had gotten
frozen because I’d recently defrosted the fridge which always makes it very
cold for a few weeks so I decided to fry the mushrooms, but it still took quite
a while for the bigger ones to thaw.
I took some time to
start tweaking the poems that I wrote for my final project. Here’s a revised
version of one that I wrote in the fall:
The Rat
A rat ran across Bathurst
making its nightly rounds
nose like a dagger
spotted like a heifer
belly to the ground
Its back so much higher
than its scavenger’s beak,
had that rat-slant forward
but more enormous
than the rats that I’d seen
But when I got home I wondered
“Was it really a rat?”
On an internet searcher
typed “rat-shaped monster”,
and here’s what came back
It was up from the southland
trying hard to be free
it had skipped passing customs
and is now playing possum
where it’s less good to eat.
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