Sometimes I hear cats that are not there,
or out of the corner of my eye, I think I see one of my cats. It has also
become evident, now that the cats are gone, how so many of my daily habits,
which, though they had nothing directly to do with the cats, were bent by the
routine of taking care of them during the nineteen years that I was their
caregiver.
On
Tuesday, October 4th, in the early afternoon, I worked again for
David Scopick’s photography class. Somehow I got him mixed up with David La
Chapelle, but I wasn’t sure and so I asked him if he’d taken a photograph
called “Death by Hamburger”. He looked at me strangely and said no, but then
jokingly asked, “Does that mean you want to buy me a hamburger?”
He
told his students that the tripod is their best friend because it teaches them
to slow down and compose. He added that another valuable compositional learning
tool is a 4x5 camera, which shows the image upside down.
I
got off more than an hour early, so I had time to go home to eat before taking
a siesta in a bed that I no longer have to flip on its edge to keep the cats and
their itchy hair off of it. I was decadent and went to bed with my boots on,
then slept for ten minutes longer than my usual half an hour.
When
I got to the lecture theatre I had more than a half an hour to wait, so I
worked on ideas for an essay that draws connections between Leonard Cohen,
Michael Ondaatje and Susan Musgrave and the style that originated with the
Decadence movement. I can certainly see a commonality of darkness between the
three poets. Musgrave seems to live in darkness, Cohen keeps a summer home
there while Ondaatje seems to watch the darkness with binoculars from an ivory
tower. I really don’t know a lot about the Decadence movement itself though.
George
arrived on time with his usual enthusiasm, “Good evening! How is everyone? Excellent!
We will try to get through sixty pages tonight!”
When
he took roll call and called “Christian” and after I responded he said,
“Welcome back! Good to see both of you again!” I assume he was also talking to
the person whose name he’d just called before mine, but if he wasn’t, it would
be pretty interesting.
Whenever
George takes attendance he sounds like he’s reading a Beat poem.
He
still hasn’t put the course up on Blackboard, but he suggested he might.
He
handed out some copies of one of his own poems that was produced for the
Mayor’s Poetry City Challenge this last April. It was entitled “The University
of Timbuktu: Prospectus (1327): “Knowledge can’t thrive in dungeons … This
university isn’t fearful of commons, but of crass, bungling elites … Wise
rulers know even grass has brains, as invisible as Consciousness … One must
have a bit of Chinese to sharpen our Arabic. (Judicious appraisal of our
tongue, in dialogue with alien thought and expression serves a spielraum, that
prevents, in our minds, the collapse of Clarity into prose, cluttered, the
disease of Beaurocracy.)”
He
also passed around copies from his private collection to show us of an old
edition of Leonard Cohen’s “Flowers for Hitler” in Spanish and another old
Milton Acorn book.
He
announced that we would not take a fifteen minute break at halftime but rather
finish fifteen minutes early because he had to go directly to the airport to
catch a plane for Scotland. He was going to Edinburgh, where he hoped the
audience would throw Scotch at him rather than tomatoes.
We
started by continuing with Irving Layton. The introduction for his book “A Red
Carpet For The Sun” was written by William Carlos Williams.
This
led George to talk briefly about two of Williams’s classic imagist poems, “The
Red Wheelbarrow”: “So much depends/upon/a red wheel/barrow/glazed with
rain/water/beside the white/chickens” and “This Is Just To Say”: “I have
eaten/the plums/ that were in/ the ice box/and which/your were
probably/saving/for breakfast/Forgive me/they were delicious/so sweet/and so
cold.”
Williams
also wrote the introduction to Ginsberg’s “Howl” and so it was a feather in
Layton’s cap to have received the same benediction.
Layton
was more like Lord Byron than Walt Whitman. They wanted to die fighting. They
wanted to swagger up to you with macho gusto and wave their cajones in your
face.
Layton
was a cavalier, a he-man that suffered Holocaust survivor’s guilt. In the 60s
and 70s he tried to reverse pacifism.
Layton’s
poem, “The Cold Green Element” proves he can’t be taken as Whitmanic.
George
implied that Walt Whitman’s “Leaves of Grass” are leaves of marijuana.
George
said, “Ginsberg can afford to be dense.” Though he meant Layton. He does that
sometimes.
The
cold green element is symbolic of poetry itself. One dives into it. The poem is
reminiscent of Klein’s “Portrait of the Poet as Landscape”. Layton sees the
poet as both daredevil and seer.
“My
murdered selves” the poet’s other guises; “the furies clear a path for me to
the worm” the furies are like muses.
George
told us a story about driving towards Montreal after “godforsaken Cornwall,
which should be wiped off the map!” when he saw a sign that read “Vers Libre”.
He quizzed us as to what it meant. I should have known, but my French was not
awake at that moment. I think someone the back must have done a search on her
phone and then called out “Free worms!” He said that was right, but it also
means “Free verse”. He said he almost drove off the highway when he saw it.
Layton
was a symbolist with a manic use of imagery.
“Fornalutx”
is a book of Layton’s nastiest male chauvinist pig poems: “Women give birth to
lice and maggots”. I had brought a sample of a nasty sexist poem from Layton’s
“Of Lovers and Lesser Men” to show and to get George’s slant on it, but since
he’d just given that sample, there was no point. This is "Teufelsdrôckh
Concerning Women": “Women are stupid/ They're cunning but they're stupid /
Life with a capital L wants it that way/ They're cunning with their clefts /
Where nothing can dislodge it / Not even Phil 301 at Queen's or Varsity / Women
will never give the world a Spinoza / A Wagner or a Marx / Some lab technicians
and second-rate poets, yes / But never an Einstein or a Goethe / Vision is
strictly a man's prerogative / So's creativity /
Except for a handful of female freaks / With
hair on their chins and enlarged glands.”
His
poem, “Keine Lazarovitch 1870-1959” is an elegy to his mother in quatrains with
imperfect slant rhymes. Rhymes are an appeal to classicism. “The inescapable
lousiness of growing old.” George lingered on the word lousy and began with,
“She was a lousy …” I finished his sentence. I didn’t want to say, “lay”, so I
said “mother”, to which George responded, “It’s almost Thanksgiving, Christian,
for cryin out loud!”
Canadian
poets came to Modernism with one foot in the Victorian age. Layton was beatnik
Byron.
We
moved on to P. K. Page. Her husband was a diplomat. Her poetry put an emphasis
on detail and stylization. She was an optic poet with precise imagery. Where
Layton might want to make us search for his point, she was precise, like F. R. Scott.
They were pointillists.
Her
poem, “Landlady” is in quatrains. Canadian Modernists are slumming classicists.
I
volunteered to read the poem.
It’s
a poem about being suspicious of others. George said, “Communist spies!” or “I
always knew he was a mass murderer!”
I
suggested that maybe her tenants are really her own thoughts.
In
her poem, “Photos of a Salt Mine”, she skilfully develops the scene. It is
exquisitely clear.
Canadian
poets doing socialism were different from US socialists. We are more positive
about beauty.
George
said that Elizabeth Bishop was also very painterly and precise.
Our
next poet was Ray Souster. George said, “Whoo! Back to Toronto! I was supposed
to meet him, but never did, for cryin out loud! I was instrumental in putting
up a plaque in his honour in Lollipop Park at Mayfield and Willard in west end
Toronto.
He
worked for the “Canadian Imperialist Bank of Commerce that sticks its trident
in those that are delinquent in their mortgages. But he wasn’t like that.”
He
was also very exact in his imagery. His poem “Somalia” is an Imagist poem.
In
his poem, “Study: the Bath” he doesn’t waste words, but rather gets to the point.
He moves from Romanticism to Decadence. The Decadents were influenced by Poe,
who wrote about the unattractive aspects of life. Souster is dripping with
Decadence here. Reminiscent of Carl Sandburg of Chicago, who like Souster was
also a populist imagist, except that he was kind of a Socialist. Scott as well
had similarities.
Of
Souster’s poem, “The Six-Quart Basket”, think back to Williams’s “Red
Wheelbarrow”.
His
poem “Downtown Corner News Stand” has a bit of King Lear. Souster also writes
about the Ex and other well-known Toronto events. He wrote about the Blue Jays
big win. George stopped to tell us that his personal prayer is that the Toronto
maple Leafs will win the Stanley Cup again before he dies.
Souster
would have been the guy to write a Rob Ford poem.
Of
the plaque that George dedicated, he told us that he picked Soutser’s poem,
“Flight of the Roller Coaster” that describes a roller coaster from the former
Sunnyside Beach Amusement Park flying over Lake Ontario.
Souster
is empathetic. He sees the better side.
I
mentioned that I thought “Downtown Corner News Stand” had similarities to
Page’s “The Landlady”, with their descriptions of people engaged in lonely
professions.
George
said that Page’s work is more ”prittay” as Muhammad Ali would say. She always
uses “le mot juste”. Souster is more down to earth. Page, the socialist,
preaches more, while Souster just says, “Look!”
George
reminded us that newspapers in Toronto used to have more than one edition.
Our
next poet was Phyllis Webb, who wrote naked poems. Her eroticism is as
minimalist as the clothing on her characters.
She
made use of the ghazal (pronounced “guzzle”). It’s a Persian verse form that
was brought to English Canadian poetry by John Thompson.
Guzzle
mauve Listerine now! Beautiful colour, but same awful taste!
The
ghazal was popular because what joins the stanzas is mood rather than form. You
can bring in anything so long as it fits the mood. You have to find energy to
keep the mood going. Its looseness makes it both attractive and challenging.
Webb
had connections with the CBC and the proto NDP.
Her
poem, “Treblinka Gas Chamber”, with the falling words, is not a ghazal. Her
poem, “Prison Report” is something like a ghazal, but her poem, “Peacock Blue:
An Anti Ghazal” really is a ghazal.
In
“Treblinka Gas Chamber”, who is David, besides David from the Bible? One could
align the poem with Decadence.
For
Edgar Allen Poe, the death of a beautiful woman was the most beautiful thing in
literature, but he was a drunk.
Her
poem is reflective of the projective verse of Charles Olson, who said the new
measure and meter for poetry is breath. The poem insists on making us fall.
I
suggested that the breaking up of sentences makes the poem sound angry.
Her
poem, “Peacock Blue: An Anti Ghazal” uses a nonce word, which is one that is
made up to use briefly: “Fishstar.”
Essex
was the lover of Queen Elizabeth I. He was executed.
The
poem is not as clear because it is a ghazal.
As
U of T students, we want to ignore intention.
Her
poem, “Prison Report” is very clear.
Our
next poet was Leonard Cohen. He had a fascination with Catholicism and its medieval
mysteries. He is both romantic and decadent. His decadence is a self-critical
romanticism. He is intellectual, conversant in English and French literature
and in popular culture. He is much more literary than Bob Dylan. There is an
embarrassment of riches in looking at his work.
In
his poem, “You Have the Lovers”, one thinks of Siva; mass death. It is maybe a
collision between the memory of generational love and the Holocaust. Eroticism
is joined here with death. Connect this to decadence.
George
wanted someone to sing Cohen’s poem, “As the Mist Leaves No Scar”. I said I
would recite it but not sing it because I didn’t like the melody. George didn’t
even know it was a song. It just felt like a song so he thought it should be
sung. I had actually forgotten the melody but what I heard in my head was not
very good. When I checked it online later though it actually doesn’t have a bad
tune.
His
poem, “Style” is both absurdist and Beat. It’s a report on what is going on in
1962. It should remind us of Ginsberg’s Howl, then George slightly misquoted
it, though probably on purpose, “Big bad Russia wants to take our cars!” The
poem is almost stand-up. The news is coming at Cohen through the radio.
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